Still Life The view from a window changes while that of a painting next to it doesn’t ‘what comes to us has chosen us’ she says setting down her coffee cup. Bruegel’s returning hunters lean into each snowy step or just the step we see assuming others ankle-deep in snow’s deceptions masking known to unknown ground as the hill drops away. Leaning into steps aids balance with caution of slicks, trips, errant falls their long-pole spears hung with rabbits over shoulders, in front probing for the next step a pack of dogs following nose to ground the hunter’s faces turned away from us in a scene with dozens of people none face us only the next step’s hidden offerings some walking iced-over ponds and streams some skating, some fishing through holes in the ice we are the scene’s only witness a face seeing itself. Slowly we begin to feel chosen by a frozen moment outside ordinary time yet within it not as contrast but as what is there naked saved for us caught up in a moment’s motions not seeing its stillness. Outside the window seductions of movement, its singularity masking our duplicity, our multiplicity tasks us. We are only a white van racing a grey road for a few seconds. An erratic scattering of bright yellow-orange leaves falling like impulses, each a glance of sunlight at just this angle missing some branches, fenceposts favoring others. Overhead is a sizeable hawk, wings outstretched in a turn: we see both wings at once one above one below its body neither flying nor falling.
Don Brandis lives quietly outside Seattle writing poems. He has a degree in philosophy and a long fascination with Zen. Some of his poems have been published by Black Moon Magazine, Amethyst Review, Blue Unicorn, Leaping Clear, and others. A book of his poems is out – Paper Birds (Unsolicited Press, 2021).

I was referred to this page by Sarah and found it amazing to read a poem about the same painting, and to read a different poet’s interpretation. I really enjoyed reading Don’s poem. “Slowly we begin to feel chosen / by a frozen moment outside ordinary time” particularly resonated.
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